Original
There is little disputing that Timothy Treadwell held a strange
fascination with grizzly bears and nature in general. The look in his eye as he
approached them, communicated with them and established himself in their
communities was one of pure dedication. My initial response was that of shock
and disbelief. Grizzly bears are some of nature’s fiercest predators. There are
multiple scenes throughout the movie of the bears battling for territory and
social order. It is appealing in a primal way. Timothy wasn’t attracted to
these characteristics. He simply found the bears to be incredible creatures. He
looked upon in awe as a mother would look upon her newborn. It was utter
fascination. This was what Timothy truly loved, the way that many people feel a
sense of fulfillment in their careers. He did what he loved, in reckless
abandon of the consequences.
Revision
I would hardly care to dispute Timothy Treadwell's fascination with grizzly bears and nature. The gleam of his eye as he stalked and observed their behaviors indicated the purest dedication. Grizzly bears are some of nature's fiercest predators. There are multiple scenes throughout the movie of the bears ripping each other apart in battle for territory and social order. Timothy saw past the attraction of primal violence. He found the bears to be incredible animals and looked upon in awe as a mother would look upon her newborn. It was utter fascination. Timothy truly loved the bears and felt a sense of fulfillment in his life direction. He did what he loved, in reckless abandon of the consequences
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